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Did you like it and do you want to hear more? | I loved it! I wanna hear more! | | 100% | [ 2 ] | Yeah, it's k. Maybe I'll hear some. ;) | | 0% | [ 0 ] | I don't really know, don't really care. | | 0% | [ 0 ] | Nah, that's enough. I don't really like it... | | 0% | [ 0 ] | NO! Stop writing everything! | | 0% | [ 0 ] |
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Lizelia Top-Mod
Number of posts : 109 Club Penguin Location : Pennsylvania Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: A Lion Poem Sat Feb 24, 2007 5:41 pm | |
| Here's a poem I wrote that I also posted somewhere else. I wrote other poems and written scary stories and other stories. Here's an example of my poem called A Lion and Me. Ask me if you want to hear my stories saved on the computer called The Serpant's Cave and The Evil Doll and my poems, The Insulting Poem, Food, Monkeys, and Invisible. A Lion and MeBy Zeleena(Lizelia) What I like most Is so mystical and mild. And that is the wonders. The wonders of the wild. To see those great beasts Roaming on the plain, Then if that Savanna is gone, Things won't be the same. How I love those lions And their warm soft fur. And it reminds me Of a beautiful cat purr. To think they're endangered It's so sad to see. If only I could meet one. A lion and me. Do you like it? Want to hear anything else? You can request a poem for me to write, too! ~Lizelia | |
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bad1boy2 Admin
Number of posts : 87 Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:39 am | |
| Wow! i like it! post some more! | |
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Lizelia Top-Mod
Number of posts : 109 Club Penguin Location : Pennsylvania Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:40 am | |
| - bad1boy2 wrote:
- Wow! i like it! post some more!
OK! Um, which one listed or you can request a subject I can write about! ~Liz | |
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bad1boy2 Admin
Number of posts : 87 Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:47 am | |
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Lizelia Top-Mod
Number of posts : 109 Club Penguin Location : Pennsylvania Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:50 am | |
| Here's the Monkeys poem:
Monkeys By Zeleena(Lizelia) For Chelsea
When I step into the jungle And look down to my feet, And I saw something cute; A monkey I had to meet.
The monkey said "Hi!" And we swang from tree to tree. If only he knew How happy I could be.
I love that monkey And cute, chubby face. And only if I could never leave this place! | |
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bad1boy2 Admin
Number of posts : 87 Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:52 am | |
| Keep up the good work! MORE MORE MORE! | |
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Lizelia Top-Mod
Number of posts : 109 Club Penguin Location : Pennsylvania Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:53 am | |
| - bad1boy2 wrote:
- Keep up the good work! MORE MORE MORE!
Just tell me what subject to write about. ~Liz | |
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bad1boy2 Admin
Number of posts : 87 Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:54 am | |
| everytime you will choose! | |
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Lizelia Top-Mod
Number of posts : 109 Club Penguin Location : Pennsylvania Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 9:39 am | |
| Here's another:
The Insulting Poem
By Zeleena(Lizelia)
Roses are red, Violets are blue. I'm a smart human, But what are you?
To express the sensation You give me when I see It's very clear That you don't matter to me.
You can say I'm evil. You can say I'm mean. But you're so ugly You not allowed be seen.
You're so stupid And you were NEVER a star. And everyone knows That I'm better than you are!
~Liz | |
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Admin Admin
Number of posts : 66 Age : 33 Club Penguin Location : Los Angeles-California Humor : Video Game Player Hobbies : Playing Club Penguin Registration date : 2007-02-17
| Subject: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 10:15 am | |
| It is sad for you to keep a lion. Your parents may not keep it. So harsh. Wish you had a lion where you can escape to the Lion World!
-Admin | |
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Lizelia Top-Mod
Number of posts : 109 Club Penguin Location : Pennsylvania Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:07 pm | |
| - Admin wrote:
- It is sad for you to keep a lion. Your parents may not keep it. So harsh. Wish you had a lion where you can escape to the Lion World!
-Admin Hmm? I don't understand... lol. ~Liz | |
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bad1boy2 Admin
Number of posts : 87 Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:16 pm | |
| Keep the poems coming in! | |
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Lizelia Top-Mod
Number of posts : 109 Club Penguin Location : Pennsylvania Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:37 pm | |
| Uh, badboy, don't double post, it was probably accident. Here's another:
Invisible
By Zeleena
I've finally noticed And no one will care If they notice me And that I'm not there.
People don't respect And no one will. They just take everything you got And leave you with a chill.
I feel I have nothing. No pride or gladness. If only someone noticed me In my neglect and sadness.
This is what it feels like To be stuck in the pen. Cause I just wished I was invisible But to only be solid again.
~Liz | |
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Admin Admin
Number of posts : 66 Age : 33 Club Penguin Location : Los Angeles-California Humor : Video Game Player Hobbies : Playing Club Penguin Registration date : 2007-02-17
| Subject: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 3:16 pm | |
| I'll delete one of bad1boy2's post since he did it again. -Admin | |
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bad1boy2 Admin
Number of posts : 87 Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 3:37 pm | |
| oops!i clicked 'submit' twice As usual,your poem ROCKS! | |
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Lizelia Top-Mod
Number of posts : 109 Club Penguin Location : Pennsylvania Registration date : 2007-02-23
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 7:03 pm | |
| - bad1boy2 wrote:
- oops!i clicked 'submit' twice
As usual,your poem ROCKS! Thank you. I'm running out of saved ones, so you can request any poem subject for me! ~Liz | |
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